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CRITIQUE DIS SHITby =Zynrah

Digital Art / Drawings / People

Edit one; Fixed the arms, thumb, abs, belly button, ear, zee nipple, and elbows. ITS STILL BOTHERING ME. amg whhyyy.
-gasp- TIS A PERSHUN AMG
lol Okay. He looks a bit wierd because I was reffing off a realllyy muscley guy lmao. but i still wanted him to be mucley. just not mega gross muscley. so.
I WAS GOING TO DRAW HIS PENOR. My poor baby is a it atm.
but my friends were all "THATS GROSS WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT."
"FINE. IM NOT DRAWING YOU BOOBS NEXT TIME."
"BUT THATS DIFFERENT. "
"NO NOT REALLY. STUPID."

okay anyways, lol. IF someone could please redline and or critique this, please do. ;-;

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*Aimee-Lesley-Sim Jan 3, 2013 Student General Artist

This is really nice!

=Zynrah Jan 3, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

thank you!

*Radiance-Eternal Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

This is actually really good! I'm impressed, haha. Really awesome job on the form. The only possible suggestion I could make would be to...maybe make the left arm a little wider? I don't know. I kind of feel his shoulder might be pulled in too far, but I really have no idea so do as you will. xD It's hard without the photo. xD

=Zynrah Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thank you for the input! It was a tad wider but before it looked a little thick so I have no idea if it should have remain bigger or if it should be thinner asfgsgfd. xDD

*Radiance-Eternal Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

You're welcome! Hahaha, I know, right? This stuff can be so incredibly frustrating. xD Do you maybe have a link to the original photo? I'm pretty good at comparing, usually.

=Zynrah Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

ohmyjesus yus ;-; [link]
Though, I tried toning down how muscley this guy was, i didnt want him so buldgy. x)
So I'm having problems that way as well. ;-;

*Radiance-Eternal Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Oh wow. o_o Lol forgot it fully nude. xD You toned him down well, for sure. ^^ One thing I'd suggest is finishing the left side of his torso - with the white gap it feels like his side begins to go out sooner than it really does. Other than that, I don't see anything big need changing. If you want to be super accurate, you might lower the angle of his front arm a bit, and raise the shoulder slightly? If you do that...you might want to make the head slightly larger too. Granted, I say this after looking at the photo...so that's mostly nitpicky critique stuff. xD

Again, awesome job!

=Zynrah Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

lmao. Sorry i forgot to warn you about that.. xDD

yeah i keep trying to fix the elft side and i just cant get it right.
And thank you very much ;-;

*Radiance-Eternal Jan 25, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Hahaha that's okay. xD I'm taking a figure drawing class this semester using nude models so...yeah. xD

Keep up the good work! ^_^

~CattickElf Dec 31, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Mmm. I must say, this is really nice. Okay, time to attempt critique.

His arms are a tad off where the elbows are. The forearm is the smaller "half" so to say. His left nipple is a bit too high in positioning; just a little lower and a little more center.

His hand looks nice, though don't forget humans have pads on their fingers, too. The thumb's a little too pointed. The ear seems too high up, also.

The belly-button's where its supposed to be, good job. Not many people put it where it goes. Though the ab's "order" so to say going up to down is Small, Medium, Large, Small (for 8 packs). I'm not sure if you did that, but just in case.

Ummmm, think that's it. Sorry if this wasn't helpful ><

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